Okay, so, spell check is your friend, and it's even a free added option when you go to post. Just a first thought.
Second thought: Why should I, as the reader, care? Yes, I've had crazy days, and the world is stressful and all that... But I don't need a poem to tell me that. Your poem doesn't accurately express the feeling, so it leaves the reader wanting more out of it. Poets should be able to take everyday emotions and transform them into words that reach past the reader's eyes and twist their souls into recognition. This just sounded like a livejournal rant to me.
Work on being unique.
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